The sun slowly setting the beautiful blue sky darkening as we speak.The wave curling like a baseball.No one could explain what they saw it was like heaven but not really.The surfer thought he was seeing stuff but  when everone saw it there jaw droped.the stunning moutsins in the background just makes this picture so unique.

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I was having a great day at the office until the great brown monster appeared in the corner of my eyes sight.I leaped like a frog up and over.I dug my paws into the armrests part of the couch.I sniff,snort i still am trying to figure out what this i.It smells like cardboard and taste like Dirt.What is it?Is it a brussel sprouts?or is it a piece of cardboard.I Don't know let's  find out next episode Thanks

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The lighty tinted blue sky silhouettes the deep blue see.The shadow mountains haunts the rusty brown jeti.The sun looks as if a radioactive nuke has hit the ocean.The couple anchest to see whats causeing this beautiful scenery.The blast sends out the most beautifull colours to the blue timied sky.The horizan sets a beautiful rainbow coming from all dirications it looks as if it has been photoshoped.

Fish Fish the best thing in the ocean.My information report will be talking about how to f fish my three paragraphs will be about the equitment you will need,How to use a fishing rod last but not least how to catch a fish.

The most important gear is a fishing rod they come in the cost of from $100 to $300 without  a rod no fishing for you.And the rest are pretty cheap.You can get a fishing lure that is  type of artificial fishing bait. The fish might thinks it's a fish you he strikes for it.Some fishing lines are too light so they need a weight that drops the line down further.Freshwater fishing  you will need a bober which indicates there a bite or a fish That's it  for this paragraph.

How to use a fishing rod firstly make sure you have your line all ready to go to do this you will need to put the line through all of the holes on the fishing rod.Now you will be able to put the bait on maybe squid or even baby herrings.Now you will lern how to cast your line in the ocean/river.

First assemble your outfit. secondly hold your rod with your domite hand.Reel in line until you have about 10 cm of line hang out of the top.hold against the rod with your index finger.Step open bail with hand last but not least point at target and swing splash.

Mmm how to catch a fish.step1 Tie your hook to your line if you don't know how read the dummies book cause i dont got time for that.step 2,3 Bait your hook cast and your line.Step 4 be patient if not go home step 5 hook that beautiful fish. Step six pull the fish in bye pumping and lifting while reeling.Last but not least  get a net and net that fish.

In conclusion fishing can be fun for some others not so much i hope you have learned what equipment you need how to use a fishing rod and how to catch a fish that's it folks.

A moa was a bird the extinct ce 1280, My three paragraph will be talking about the habitat how it got extinct last but not least what physical attributes.

The legendary moa is a vegetarian they lived in big groups around shurblad and forest. Moas

diet consisted of shrub,trees as well as herbs and long grass. Most people probably thought they eat meat and herbivores. Moa  is a tall bird but skinny looking but they weight around 230 kgs.

Moas were around late ce 1200 and we're extinct 1600s these birds were so rare the maories would kill them for there feathers and meat and sell them to the highest bidder that's why they are no existing. A moa could reach up to 3.6 (12ft). The South Island was the moas land until the maories came.

A moa is not related to the giraffe but has a really long neck. A moa is able to eat high tree branches. The scientific name is dinornithidea. The legendary bird could not fly but they had the ability to scout the area for nearby predators. There main predators were  eagles and dogs.

In conclusion moas are awesome and should be alive right this day. I hope you have learned something to day you will now There herbivores.

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1Describe this  photo

The sun slowly setting the beautiful blue sky darkening as we speak.The wave curling like a baseball.No one could explain what they saw it was like heaven but not really.The surfer thought he was seeing stuff but  when everone saw it there jaw droped.the stunning moutsins in the background just makes this picture so unique.

2describe this photo

I was having a great day at the office until the great brown monster appeared in the corner of my eyes sight.I leaped like a frog up and over.I dug my paws into the armrests part of the couch.I sniff,snort i still am trying to figure out what this i.It smells like cardboard and taste like Dirt.What is it?Is it a brussel sprouts?or is it a piece of cardboard.I Don't know let's  find out next episode Thanks for watching what is this with star puggy.

Reflection

Yes or No

Reflection is a way to teach kids a lesson?But does it work?Is it to soft? I don't know but let's find out.Instead we should be giving kids chores not walking with the teachers that's for babies.In my three papgraphs i will talk about what should change about reflection.What we should change about reflection,What kids think of reflection,punishment back in the old days

Reflection should be a scary punishment that will change your attitude and convince you to do no naughty stuff.I reckon walking around with the teacher is more like a bonding time with that teacher.It should be chanded to somthing scary like cleaning the toilet or picking up rubbish for twenty minutes and if they dont pick enough rubbish make the punishment longer untill they know not to do it again.The badder the incedent the higher punishments ect missing sport exanges or even missing out on big day out

I strongly believe that the kids think reflection is a joke simply because 90% of the kids that get on reflection keep reoffending.Reflection isn't a joke it is serious business the punishment doesn't suit the crime.Damien was scared of being in trouble simply because of the strp

Punishment in the past was way more severe .That stopped kids from being naughty.The worst punishment at school was the great cane  and the strap and many more crazy punishments.Imagine you getting the cane around the bottom.

In conclusion punishment does not suit the crime.something needs to happen otherwise.Reflection is a joke and will be happening way more often.

Build a business

Build a business is a fun experience for everyone at Stratford primary school to sell their products to our community.This following report  will talk about the process up to market night,how successful was build a business for my group,and what I would of changed.      

The process up to market night Build a business was quite time consuming and frustrating the hardest part definitely was the portfolio all the drawing  and colouring which are my biggest weakness. We managed to get a 1 out of ten on the portfolio and got a ten out of ten for the fudge.

This year Fudge Fantasy made a total of $160 dollars  and still plenty of ious to go through.In my eyes we a succesful business night.The taste testers just made this business so much more money.The most sold fudge was white chocolate oreo.That definatley the tastiest Flavour. We will have a massive week of baking to deliver the beautiful.

I reckon we should of done a better stole because it was real bland and no colour at all That's really it

I found build a business fun but challenging.I reckon this is a great to teach kids how to work a business.I hope you have ejoyed.

World  war 2

The world war 2 was a horrible event in the history of the world.It all started when the nazi decied to invade poland the french and great britan declerd war against germany.on the first of september 1939 the war ofical stared. The united states of america were the first country to land in the nazis territory then it was britan.  The war was on land air and sea. The americans target adolf hitler who was hiding in his underground bunker in berlin heavily guarded by the nazi. five years later the americans still had known site of hitler at this point over 63 million civilians and military had died. eventually they found the bunker but no sight of hitler just a gun and heaps of blood . The blood was assessed  and confirmed that hitler suicide minutes before they reached to him today on they still have not found hitler's body. on that day the nazis surrounded and then the  war was over.

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Hitler thought the jews were making less jobs for the rest of germany so hitler decided to make a camp called concentration were the jews would be held for months to years and then be gassed.Hitler thought without the jew everyone would be rich and have the best lifestyle. The jews were so smart at everything most of the jobs were jews like bing doctor,mechanic and a ton more.

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The americans started bombing germany in 1943 and 1944 as well as sending troops in bye sea. There were 200,000 troop waiting to board 7000 boat.In the war there were over 418912 land vehicles used in five year.The aliced forces were battling in berlin for one year stragiht seacheing for hittler. There were 27,700 tons worth of bombs dropped.

How to make oreo fudge.

Ingredients.

.I can of condensed milk.

.500 grams of chocolate.

.50 grams of butter.

.A packet  of oreos.

Steps

Step 1. Crush the oreos

Step 2. Put the contents milk, chocolate and butter into a pot.

Step 3. Put the pot onto the stove top on 70 degrees.

Step 4. Put the crunched up oreos in the pot and stir for 5 minutes.

Step 5. Once all the chocolate has melted but it in a tray with baking paper in the bottom so it doesn't stick.

Step 6. Put the tray in the fridge for upto 8 hours to set.

Step 7. Get the tray out of the fridge and sit it on a bench for up to 30 minutes

Step 8. Cut it out into even squares.

Step 9. Enjoy your oreo fudge.

You can customize with any other ingredients and it will work the same. for example white chocolate, cranberries or nuts.

Chewing gum

Chewing gum should be allowed at our school.Just imagine people's breath stinkin in the afternoon that would be dreadful.It has been proven to help your teeth,protiction.

Chewing gum should be allowed from 11 to the end of the day.This way kids won’t have a bad breath after they have food.Chip breath is the worst just imagine smelling that all day.

We’re year we won’t put our chewing gum under our desk plus our legs will all be sticky.From touching the gum.As we are chewing the saliva build up which protects our teeth.There is also sugar free gum which prevent the normal chewing gum to bite away your teeth.

Mr Moore I believe that scientifically gum can work your brain into concentrating on your work.So trust us or people will start ditrusting you.Aren’t you meant to improve this school because at the moment your not improveing it in fact your ruining it.So you better start panicing.

We know you will say no but you're wrong we won’t put gum under our desk that is just dreadful to think we would do that.We’re year 7,8 not year 1,2.We know you trust us just give it a trail 1 day 2 day 1 week until comes every day.

Mr Moore I hope you consider a day of gum at least if not forever.I hope my four paragraph have persuade you to allow gum at school.I bet you we will shock you how well we can have gum at school.

L.G Describe your senses in detail through descriptive language and elaboration  

S.O.S Describe senses

use at least 3 adjectives

use at least 3 adverbs

-elaborate each sense with an extra sentence

It was a beautiful summer's day in sunny stratford  after a good day at school.I was getting ready to practice my bowling.I bend down to pick up the worn out old ball.I tilt my head in a fast motion. All of a sudden I can’t see anything it felt like i bumped my head.

I cover my head all i can feel is wet drips dripping down my uneven head.I’m not crying.

My hands slide down my forehead.I take a look.All i can see is blood pouring everywhere.

The blood nearly drys instantly all over my new top and my hand feels like solid dry mud.

My reaction was screaming.I run inside  and get a old towel.My shiny white jersey will be ruied forever.I rush to the shiny silver beatle my sister drives us straight to the docters.I was really freaking out like a zombie apoclips.The docter said i would need two really tiny stiches.It looks like a really small hole.Still today I wounder what hit me in my head

L.G Describe my senses during a specific moment

S.O.S Describe each of my senses

See

Hear

Smell

Taste

Vary sentence starters

I was walking through the muddy wet canyon.I stopped recorded the massive rain drops sliding down my black umbrella.My eyes capture lighting and thunder striking in the distance.I grab  a cigar out of my shached jersey I taste it.It taste as if it was a straw in a cup.I smell the smoke from my  cigar the smell disapears nearly instined.My hand catches a massive puddle I drink it like a cup the water tingals down my dry throut.

Fishing

It's a beautiful day in sunny New Plymouth

I cast my shiny blue rod in the rough blue sea

My rod vibrates like crazy “i'm getting bites”

I slowly reel my rod in if feels like i've got a marlin on

I pull my rod as far back as i can and reel

The fish goes crazy all over the place

“Get the net ready” i see the beautiful fish

The fish weights 15kg that's the biggest fish i've caught

Stratford heat

Walking downtown with my grey sandals melting

as If I was walking on lava

The burning sun making me pour sweat down my tan brown body

I feel my sumbro burning on my head as If I had no hat on

All I can smell is burning tar polluting the atmosphere

I feel the sun burning through my brown tanned skin

I see everyone having an ice cream which is dripping all down there tops

I hear kids screaming in pain as if they were on top a erupting  mountain

It felt as if mount taranaki erupted

The beaches were packed as if there was a carnival in rio