The sun slowly setting the beautiful blue sky darkening as we speak.The wave curling like a baseball.No one could explain what they saw it was like heaven but not really.The surfer thought he was seeing stuff but  when everone saw it there jaw droped.the stunning moutsins in the background just makes this picture so unique.

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I was having a great day at the office until the great brown monster appeared in the corner of my eyes sight.I leaped like a frog up and over.I dug my paws into the armrests part of the couch.I sniff,snort i still am trying to figure out what this i.It smells like cardboard and taste like Dirt.What is it?Is it a brussel sprouts?or is it a piece of cardboard.I Don't know let's  find out next episode Thanks

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The lighty tinted blue sky silhouettes the deep blue see.The shadow mountains haunts the rusty brown jeti.The sun looks as if a radioactive nuke has hit the ocean.The couple anchest to see whats causeing this beautiful scenery.The blast sends out the most beautifull colours to the blue timied sky.The horizan sets a beautiful rainbow coming from all dirications it looks as if it has been photoshoped.