L.G Describe your senses in detail through descriptive language and elaboration  

S.O.S Describe senses

use at least 3 adjectives

use at least 3 adverbs

-elaborate each sense with an extra sentence

It was a beautiful summer's day in sunny stratford  after a good day at school.I was getting ready to practice my bowling.I bend down to pick up the worn out old ball.I tilt my head in a fast motion. All of a sudden I can’t see anything it felt like i bumped my head.

I cover my head all i can feel is wet drips dripping down my uneven head.I’m not crying.

My hands slide down my forehead.I take a look.All i can see is blood pouring everywhere.

The blood nearly drys instantly all over my new top and my hand feels like solid dry mud.

My reaction was screaming.I run inside  and get a old towel.My shiny white jersey will be ruied forever.I rush to the shiny silver beatle my sister drives us straight to the docters.I was really freaking out like a zombie apoclips.The docter said i would need two really tiny stiches.It looks like a really small hole.Still today I wounder what hit me in my head

L.G Describe my senses during a specific moment

S.O.S Describe each of my senses

See

Hear

Smell

Taste

Vary sentence starters

I was walking through the muddy wet canyon.I stopped recorded the massive rain drops sliding down my black umbrella.My eyes capture lighting and thunder striking in the distance.I grab  a cigar out of my shached jersey I taste it.It taste as if it was a straw in a cup.I smell the smoke from my  cigar the smell disapears nearly instined.My hand catches a massive puddle I drink it like a cup the water tingals down my dry throut.