Camp H20 water park
We were on the bus heading towards the best park ever, water park h20. In Upper Hutt. It will take over 1 hour. I was so pumped to go on every slide. I can't explain my feelings, excited,hyped and a little bit afraid that i’ll cut my self and bleed. One hour later, everyone is so happy and excited. I got dressed as fast as possible as if someone was chasing me down. I went on the black slide first then the blue and then the yellow, I felt as if I was flying.There was even a wave system, the waves were nearly taller than me. Out of all the cool slides I had to pick the black one because you could not see where you were going, it was amazing. Once we were done swimming I was so happy I wanted to stay there for hours. We were all hoping on the bus but I took a while but at the corner of my eye I saw people with bag. I was wondering if they iceblocks and my guess was true. I had nice tasty one. We were then heading off the the amazing camp site.

Good description Alex,I like your sentence structure. I think you could add paragraphs
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